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TBT | Marbleheart | Skyclan | Warrior

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N A M E

 

[ Current Name ] 
 Marbleheart 

[ Past Names ] 
Mocha, Marblepaw

[ Nicknames ] 
N/A

[ Meanings ] 
• Marble - For both the pure clean white base coat of Marbleheart's fur and the 'marbled' appearance of her markings.  
• Heart - For a certainty In her beliefs and ideals  






Lyric 
 


 

A G E

 

[ Current Age ] 
 40.5 moons

[ Starting Age ] 
28 moons

[ Age of death ]  
N/A






Lyric 
 


 

A P P E A R A N C E

 

[ Fur colour and pattern ] 
White she-cat with patches of marbled brown scattered across her pelt.

[ Fur texture ] 
Marbleheart's fur is long and has an extremely soft smooth texture.

[ Physical Build ] 
Average; quite large and muscular, has strong legs like most other Skyclanners.  
 
[ Eyes ]  
A dull dark blue

[ Breed ] 
Maine coon mix / moggy




 Who shot that arrow in your throat?
Who missed the crimson apple?
And there is discord in the garden tonight
 
 

 

A L L E G I A N C E - R A N K

 

[ Current Clan ] 
Skyclan

[ Past Clan(s) ] 
Kittypet/Loner

[ Loyal to; ]  
Skyclan


[ Current Rank ] 
Warrior

[ Past Ranks ] 
Kittypet (kit),Apprentice

[ Desired Rank ]  
N/A







 


G E N D E R - S E X U A L I T Y

 

[ Biological gender ] 
Female

[ Gender identity ] 
Female

[ Pronouns ]  
female pronouns she/her


[ Romantic orientation ] 
Biromantic

[ Sexual orientation ] 
Bisexual






lyric 
 


 

P E R S O N A L I T Y

 

Key
Positive - :bulletgreen: 
Neutral - :bulletyellow:
Negative - :bulletred: 

[ :bulletgreen: Social ] 
 Were you looking for Thunderclan's most social butterfly? Prancefoot loves interacting with the cats around her; She likes to hear about her Clanmate's day to day lives even if they aren't particularly interesting. Prance makes an extra effort to help less social cats open up. This friendly feline is always up for a chat and her Clanmates can approach her knowing they won't be ignored for a second. 

[ :bulletgreen: Loyal ] 
Perhaps she's a bit more law-abiding because her sister is leader; Prancefoot does her very best to follow the warrior code at all times. She's always careful when making friends in other clans because to betray her clan would be betraying her big sister. If prance ever was in a situation where her loyalty was tested you could be certain she would not be disloyal.


[ :bulletgreen: Eloquent ]  
Riverclan 




[ :bulletyellow: Talkative ] 
Being Talkative assumably comes with being social. With Prancefoot you needn't be concerned about having to keep the conversation going; Though you might concern yourself over getting actually stopping it. This she-cat could talk all day and night without pause and that can be a problem. Prancefoot does talk too much sometimes and if it becomes a problem it might just be best to let her know.


[ :bulletyellow: Humorous ] 
Prancefoot can be quite funny depending on your sense of humour. Her jokes are generally well-meaning and she does avoid being blatantly offensive about things a cat cannot control; but sometimes she may slip up. For cats who don't like more lighthearted conversation Prance may not the ideal candidate to interact with.


[ :bulletyellow: Forward ]  
If you have something to say, say it!




[ :bulletred: Rude ] 
Riverclan


[ ] 
N/A


[ Trait ]  
Riverclan 


Example
Bullet; Green Positive
Bullet; Red Negative
Bullet; Orange Neutral 

Bullet; Green Kind 
(describe with 3+ sentences)
Bullet; Red Rude
(describe with 3+ sentences)
Bullet; Orange Quiet
(describe with 3+ sentences)




Lyric 
 


 


Brief Backstory: (4-6 sentences PER age frame [before birth, Kithood, Apprenticehood, Warriorhood, etc etc]) Yes, we do want a section of how the parents met, especially if your cat is in a Clan.




Lyric 
 


 

[ Grandmother ] 
N/A

[ Grandfather ] 
N/A

[ Mother ] 
 Cream  

[ Aunt(s) ] 
N/A

[ Uncle(s) ]  
N/A


[ Grandmother ] 
N/A

[ Grandfather ] 
N/A

[ Father ] 
 Russet

[ Aunt(s) ] 
N/A

[ Uncle(s) ]  
N/A


[ Male Littermate(s) ] 
n/a

[ Female littermate(s) ] 
 n/a

[ Male siblings ] 
 n/a

[ Female siblings ] 
Caramel crunch


[ Mate ]  
 Kestrelfeather

[ kits ]  
Petrelkit, Mochakit and ?

[ Nieces ] 
n/a

[ nephews ] 
N/A

 




Lyric 
 


 

Relationships: 
(An example to what we are looking for)

Death Dead
missing
Bullet; White Acquaintance
Bullet; Purple Uneasy, unknown
Bullet; Green Friend | To Be Respected
Bullet; Blue Close Friend
Bullet; Pink Crush
Bullet; Red Lust
DBullet; RedBullet; Red Love
Rose Mate
Bullet; Black Hate | Enemy
Bullet; Yellow Family

[ ThunderClan ]



[ Kestrelfeather | sealocalypse | :bulletgreen: :bulletred::bulletred: :bulletred: :rose: ] 
"My mate and soon-to-be father of my kittens! He's helped me through so much and he means the world to me. I can't wait to see the look on his face when I tell him I'm expecting!"


[ Crookedfang | Friskusis | :skull: :bulletblack: ] 

"He's a real piece of work. Dropping branches and sliding bellies open. Apparently he's gone and died so I guess he won't be an issue anymore"


[ Soysilk / Buckfang ] 
 :bulletyellow: :bulletgreen: :bulletred::bulletred: : opinion


[ Featherspring ] 
 :bulletyellow: :bulletgreen: :bulletred::bulletred: : opinion


[ ??? ] 
 :bulletyellow: :bulletgreen: :bulletred::bulletred::bulletpurple: : opinion


[ Windclan ]



[ Name ] 
bullet : opinion


[ Riverclan ]



[ Name ] 
bullet : opinion


[ Shadowclan ]

 

[ Name ] 
bullet : opinion


[ Skyclan ]



[ Name ] 
bullet : opinion


[ Outside of the Clans ]



[ Name ] 
bullet : opinion






Lyric 
 


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[ Grandmother ] 
N/A

[ Grandfather ] 
N/A

[ Father ] 
Buckfang

[ Aunt(s) ] 
N/A

[ Uncle(s) ]  
N/A


[ Male Littermate(s) ] 
Whispervoice

[ Female littermate(s) ] 
Mapleglimmer/star

[ Male siblings ] 
Whispervoice

[ Female siblings ] 
Mapleglimmer/star, Featherspring, ?


[ Mate ]  
N/A (Open)

[ kits ]  
N/A

[ Nieces ] 
Peonykit (adopted)

[ nephews ] 
N/A





Lyric 
 




Roleplay Sample: (Please make it 6+ sentences. We want to see how well you roleplay with other people. It is a literate group.)





Lyric 
 


 



edit: She has been accepted so if you want to Rp send me a note anytime~
Edit: Updated Relationships

Green Square BulletGeneral information Green Square Bullet
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Names: Mocha, Marbleheart
Age: 25 moons
Gender:  female
Breed: Maine coon/ Turkish van
Clan: Skyclan
Rank:  Warrior

Green Square BulletRelationship informationGreen Square Bullet 
Sexual Orientation:  Bisexual
Sea Green Bullet - F2U! Likes

She likes cats (whether male or female) that can keep up with her and tolerate her personality, she wants someone who will have fun with her, But as well as this she longs for someone she can trust and confide in and who she can curl up with every night. She has a preference for mid to dark fur in toms though she occasionally takes a liking to tabbies. In she-cats she likes mid to light fur though she is less picky, she also likes tabbies, calicos and tortoiseshells. Also in both genders she is looking for someone she can defend, and she does judge quite heavily on appearance.

Bullet; RedDislikes

Cats that are too serious or dominant, cats that can't keep their mouths shut or who argue with Marbleheart. As far as appearance goes Marbleheart just isn't attracted to ugly cats, though she won't mind a cat that has average looks. She dislikes cats who can never bend or break the rules for her since she has no problems with cross clan relationships.


Green Square BulletPersonalityGreen Square Bullet
Key: Positive=Bullet; Green Negative=Bullet; Red  Both or either=Bullet; Yellow

Bullet; RedRebellious
Marbleheart is a rebel; if she is forcibly told to do something it is likely she will directly disobey the order. Due to this she can annoy her clan mates to no end and she gets in arguments often. Though she is rebellious she realizes there are times when orders must be obeyed and she remains to be a loyal cat to her clan.

Bullet; RedAggressive 

Marbleheart is a naturally aggressive cat and she likes to fight it gives her the rush of adrenaline that she loves. Marbleheart has a tendency to turn verbal arguments into physical ones and this often includes claws unsheathed. She also has a tendency to turn violent if she feels a cat is trying to force her to do something.

Bullet; RedAdrenaline seeker/Daredevil

Marbleheart is a thrill seeker by nature and she often does things that other cats would see as stupid or dangerous but she is skilled enough so it is rare for her to get injured. She will take any dare she is given no matter how mouse-brained or dangerous.

Bullet; Yellow Bullet; Green Intelligent/Witty

Even though most cats see her as a stupid rebellious thrill seeker she is actually very intelligent and she can work out complex battle plans and routes in her mind. Due to how often she gets in arguments Marbleheart had developed a way with words, witty comebacks and insults. She looks down on cats that use pre designated insults she respects cats that come up with their own.

Bullet; Green Perceptive/Observant/Spatially aware

Marbleheart is a very perceptive observant cat and she is a very skilled scout and spy. Being very Observant/Perceptive Marbleheart rarely gets lost and when she does she soon finds her way again. Marbleheart is very spatially aware and she has no problem navigating her territory with ease, she knows every twist turn tree and branch from her explorations.

Bullet; Yellow Vain/  Bullet; GreenElegant

Despite her other traits Marbleheart is actually very vain as a result of being born a kittypet and living as one for part of her life. One of the fastest ways to get her mad is to insult her appearance and she often starts fights over it. Marbleheart is also a very elegant cat, even when messing around there is a certain grace to her movements that most cats lack.

Bullet; YellowProtective/ Bullet; YellowLoyal

Once Marbleheart has grown an attachment to a cat she will defend them to the best of her ability even if she gets injured in the process. She is loyal to cats that she grows attached to though not always completely loyal to her clan in the fact that she crosses the borders without much guilt.

Bullet; Green Brave/ Bullet; GreenHeroic

Marbleheart is not a coward she readily takes risks without fear just for the sake of an adrenaline rush and she will often do things in an emergency that most cats wouldn't out of fear. She is also somewhat heroic and she won't leave another cat to suffer unless they're an enemy or she has an important reason not to

Bullet; Yellow Bullet; Green Curious

Marbleheart is very Curious by nature and she has no problem with readily offering herself up as a scout or spy merely to satisfy her own curiosity. This can get her in trouble though as she sometimes ventures into dangerous situations because curiosity brings her to it.

Bullet; YellowFlirty

Marbleheart is more or less a flirt if a cat catches her attention whether it be thorough appearance or actions she will probably make a move. When she is flirting she has the tendency to ignore borders and this gets her in trouble at gatherings and on border patrols occasionally.



Green Square Bullet Brief BackstoryGreen Square Bullet

Before birth
Marbleheart was born as the kit of two kittypets, Maple was a smooth talking but good hearted rogue tom and While Cream was a strict and vain but loving cat who often participated in cat shows. The two met as a result of Cream spending days out in the sun in her twoleg's backyard. As soon as Maple saw Cream he fell head over heels for her and he was determined to get her attention. Cream noticed this tom and she wasn't disappointed with his appearance but she wanted to let him make a move. Latte soon started flirting with the she-cat and she didn't stop him as she quite enjoyed it.they began to meet daily becoming closer over the span of a year until Cream found out that she was expecting both cats were surprised and Maple was excited for the chance of passing down his skills. Mocha was born and her name was given due to her fur colour and Cream's twolegs the family moved to Cream's house Maple deciding not to live as a kittypet but still with his mate and kit.

Kithood
Mocha was an adventurous kit and she started exploring as soon as she opened her eyes though her mother discouraged it. From birth she was much closer to her father than to her mother. Though Cream protested Maple decided to teach her how to survive in the wild he told her stories of strong and brave warriors and she told him that one day she would be a warrior too. While Maple taught Mocha how to survive, Cream taught her how to act and to care for her appearance. Mocha learned all that she could from her parents and she grew curious of the brave and strong warriors in her father's stories.
 Her mother and father continued to train her in each of their respective skills. One day Mocha discovered that Maple and Cream were expecting kits again and she was overjoyed excited that she would finally have someone other than her parents to interact with. Soon the kit was born and Mocha gained a sister named Caramel, she liked her and took great pride in being an older sister. Mocha started to teach Caramel everything Maple had taught her but Cream wanted one of her kits to be raised to be 'proper'. Mocha found this annoying and she continued to teach Caramel in secret her father knew but he didn't say anything. One day Mocha went out with her father on a hunting trip near the thunderpath while Cream and Caramel stayed home. The two cats were successful in their hunt and they found their way home along the thunderpath, While walking Mocha spotted a bird on the thunderpath and she tried to catch it unaware of an approaching monster. Maple shoved her out of the way saving her life but paying with his own. Mocha was devastated and she tried to bring him back but she was unable too, she returned home and told her mother and sister tearfully about what had happened and how she had thought it was her fault. Cream was upset and she secretly blamed Mocha but she didn't show it Caramel was upset but she tried to reassure her sister. Now a lone parent Cream grew stricter though she was noticeably more strict towards Mocha and she had less hesitation in pinpointing her flaws and what she was doing wrong. Mocha put up with the favouritism for her sister but she was growing jealous and lonely from it. Eventually one day when Mocha had been scolded she ran away determined never to return

Apprentice age
Now just having reached apprentice age Mocha had run away and she was headed for Skyclan, she had been taught by her father to survive and for the first few days she managed without problem. Eventually though, she grew tired as she struggled through the treacherous terrain of Skyclan's territory her paws growing cracked and raw. After a few more days of struggling and being unable to catch any prey as she had at first she collapsed on the edge of Skyclan territory. She was found by a Skyclan patrol unconscious at this point and after some debate on their part she was brought back to camp. She was nursed back to health and she was brought to speak with the leader, she told them everything about her past and she  was told that she had two choices stay and become an apprentice to prove herself worthy of the clan though she had lived as a kittypet, or leave and stay outside of the borders for good. She immediately decided to stay and she was apprenticed to Mushroom. She grew close to her mentor as he taught her how to hunt, climb and fight as well as about Starclan and the warrior and such concepts were foreign to her but she picked them up quite easily after a while.She grew and learned a lot growing accustomed to clan life and as comfortable in Skyclan as a clan born warrior and eventually she was given her warrior name after aiding her clan in fighting off a fox on the edge of the territroy her name was: Marbleheart, Marble for her pelt with marbled patches and Heart for her strong sense of belief in her opinions and her passion in what she was skilled at.

Warrior age (Will update with details and events as they occur)
Marbleheart took to warrior life easily, she was a strong fighter and she always tried to be at the head of a patrol. She was however unable to make any real friendships. Her daredevil side often became a problem for her as she was allowed more freedom she was also presented with more opportunities, she has taught herself to swim through seeing how long she could hold her breath and become extremely skilled at leaping silently from tree to tree. Marbleheart despite all this is a mostly loyal warrior and a cat that will always do her best to keep herself out of too much trouble. She has recently taken an interest in creating a romantic relationship...
Green Square Bullet Family/ RelationshipsGreen Square Bullet
Family:
Mother:Cream (Alive)
Father:Maple (deceased)
Siblings: Caramel (Sister/Alive)

Death Dead
missing
Bullet; White Acquaintance
Bullet; Purple Uneasy, unknown
Bullet; Green Friend | To Be Respected
Bullet; Blue Close Friend
Bullet; Pink Crush
Bullet; Red Lust
Bullet; Red Bullet; Red Love
 Rose Mate
Bullet; Black Hate | Enemy
Bullet; Yellow Family
Bullet; Orange Fear
Light Purple Bullet - F2U! Mentor/apprentice

Yellow-Green Bullet - F2U!SkyclanYellow-Green Bullet - F2U! 

-Light Purple Bullet - F2U! Bullet; White -Mushroom/Warrior/xx-nightstorm-xx.deviantart.co…TurkFish/
"My mentor, he taught me well, we aren't really friends not as close as that acquaintances maybe, Either way I hope he finds someone someday he deserves it. I never really did find out how he felt about me.."

Bullet; Green  Doestep/Warrior/wildfire-tama.deviantart.com/a…
Wildfire-Tama
-" Doestep is a nice cat, One of my rare Friends I suppose. I can confide in her regarding many manners. I haven't told her about Kestrelfeather but I did tell her about Crookedfang. Speaking of Crookedfang I think she knows him more than she's letting on...

Bullet; BlueRiverclanBullet; Blue

Bullet; WhiteWindclanBullet; White

Bullet; PurpleShadowclanBullet; Purple 

- Bullet; Green - Nettlepaw/ Apprentice/the-blue-tides.deviantart.com/…
"I met this young cat by accidentally crossing the Shadowclan border. He's very friendly and surprisingly skilled at jumping (with a bit of help) and making animal sounds particularly toads. We chatted for a while and we both have a lot in common: thick fur, jumping ability, and the desire to go to a gathering (neither of us have been yet) I hope to see him again soon, at a gathering would be perfect~"

ThunderClan
Bullet; Yellow

-Bullet; Green Bullet; Pink Kestrelfeather/ Warrior/ the-blue-tides.deviantart.com/… /Sealoslide
"I met Kestrelfeather at the border, we talked for a while and agreed on our opinions of Riverclan I fell in the lake and he saved my life. I'd say we're friends now but maybe... I feel a bit different about it, we're going to meet again and I can't help but be anxious"
EDIT:
:bulletetred:I confess my feelinngs and he returned them! I can barely believe it. Now... With the threat of Nightplum I've decided to.. Well I'm going to try and join Thunderclan to be with him.
:bulletred:  / :bulletred: :bulletred:  I love him, And one night we did it. I don't know if I'm expecting but I can't forget about that. Now I see him and can't stop thinking about it.


-Bullet; Black  Crookedfang/Warrior/friskusis.deviantart.com/art/T…
-"That fox heart! He dropped a branch on me, and sliced my belly open for nothing! Then he threatened a war, right after the plague no less is he mad!? If I get my claws on him again I'll slice his belly open and we'll see how he likes it! "

- :bulletwhite: :bulletgreen: Nightgaze / Warrior / Application / FaIIenShadows
"I met this Tom when he pulled me out of a river on Shadowclan territory after meeting Nettlepaw. He was very kInd, And he helped me warm up. I'll hAve to keep an eye out For him at gatherings "

Bullet; Black Non clanBullet; Black 
-Bullet; Yellow Bullet; Black Cream/Kittypet/Npc/Me/- "my mother, we were never close so I feel no regret for running away, I resent her for being so obvious about how much she liked me compared to Caramel and I don't have any desire to see her again"

-Bullet; Yellow Bullet; Blue Bullet; Red Bullet; Red Caramel/Kittypet/Npc/Me/- "My sister, we were close once and maybe i would be okay with seeing her again if it weren't for my mother"

-Death  Bullet; Yellow Bullet; Green Bullet; Red Bullet; Red Maple/Rogue/Npc/Me/- "My father he was a good cat and teacher I always blamed myself for his death I always will but I suppose if he had never died I never could have become a warrior"

-Bullet; Green  Angel /Kittypet/eto-nyan.deviantart.com/art/TB… eto-nyan
- " I met this she-cat at the river and saved her when she fell in the water. She's very friendly and curious about clan life, and a former kittypet like me! I offered her a place in Skyclan if she wanted maybe I'll meet her again sometime"

Starclan/ The dark forest


- Death Bullet; Purple Bullet; Black Bullet; Orange Light Purple Bullet - F2U!  Nightplum 'The thief'/ Warrior of the dark forest/ of the queen /flint-productions.deviantart.c… Flint-Productions
- "What can I say about this cat? She entered my dream and brou me to the dark forest. At first everything was fine, she was sarcastic and bitter but not hostile. Then she talked about Kestrelfeather and I knew she wanted to harm him. I offered for her to name her price and swore allegiance to 'The queen' she started 'Training' with me but it was more like toying with me. She nearly made me swallow death berries. I broke our agreement and I'm going to keep her away fro Kestrelfeather if it kills me! She won't harm a hasir on his pelt."

Roleplay
 SampleGreen Square Bullet

(I'm going to provide multiple examples just to give you a clear idea of how I roleplay, All of them are taken from RPs with TDC and all characters belong to their respective owners)

Nightstorm rolled her eyes as she turned the corner and slipped into the cave that was the Sharkclan camp. She padded over to the fresh kill pile and set the egg down against the other prey so it wouldn't roll. She turned to Lightningpaw "Well kid I'm gonna go out again but that was fun, maybe we'll do it again sometime" with that she walked past Lightningpaw giving her a head but as she passed. She slipped around the corner and out of camp, she had surprised herself today that was rare though it had happened with Tidepaw as well and she half hoped one of them would follow. She rolled her eyes at her own thoughts and started her downward descent, she stretched after she had landed on the soft sand almost hesitant, almost.

After a while of walking Nightstorm reached the wall of rock that housed Sharkclan at the top. She sighed and slipped the egg carefully off her back she glanced back "Okay if you don't already have a plan to get the egg up there it may be worth doing what I do" she suggested. "watch" Nightstorm stood on her hind legs in front of the rock wall the egg at her back paws, without moving away from the wall she picked up the egg and rested it against the wall so one side was pressed against the wall and another on her chest. She lifted her back paws first hooking her claws in a chip in the rock she pulled her front paws up climbing upwards, the egg rolled between her chest and the wall. She risked a glance back at Lightningpaw "Okay come on" she said continuing upwards.


Nightstorm pushed through the humid jungle mumbling out curses at the heat, usually she would have just gone to the shore but it seemed like nearly every cat in Sharkclan was there and she wasn't in the mood to socialize with more than one cat. After slipping past a final copse of trees she reached the gathering place she found a small patch of stone in shade from a palm and she flopped down. Closing her eyes she let herself enjoy the cool stone she was unaware of another presence nearby.


Nightstorm jumped as she heard a tom yell at her, she leaped up and backed away bristling "What the heck was that!?" she growled "You nearly gave me a heart attack mousebrain!" she growled. She scented the air "I should've known that it would be a Scorchclan cat" she said lashing her tail "And I'm Nightstorm of Sharkclan" she added answering his original question "Now what's your name?" she growled.

Nightstorm let out a gasp as her back hit the water, and then she snapped her jaws shut. The momentum of her fall sent her sinking down. Bubbles floated around her body but she was too disoriented to realize what was up and down, in her confusion she tried to take a breath only to choke on water. She closed her mouth and frantically paddled towards light her lungs bursting for need of air, black pressed at the edge of her vision and the dark depths seemed to drag her down. Visions of her parents death swirled around her mind, their screams, the splashing and then they were gone.... /No!/ she yowled in her mind trying frantically to get upwards /Please no!/ she thought as the darkness pushed further across her vision and her paws grew weak, she started to drift downwards seeing a flicker of sunlight before she blacked out.

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UGH! I wish I could join TBT, but it's closed.